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Don’t take that tone with me

Often copywriting is seen as an afterthought in digital work. Nail a killer strategy, design like picasso, develop the masterpiece then haul it back over to the client to plug in the content. However wordsmithing is not just a nice to have, it is essential to customer relationships! As the old advertising saying says “the customer is not an idiot, she is your wife.”

A recent experiement proved this point when they tested how customers react when an airline cancels a flight based purely on the email copy.

Respondents were asked whether the refund instructions would put them off flying with each of the airlines again.

  • More than two-thirds were put off flying with Virgin again.
  • More than half were put off flying with British Airways again.
  • Just fewer than 50% were put off flying with Ryanair again.

The report says that airlines could therefore retain 12% more customers following flight cancellations if they altered the tone of their emails. Sure this maybe massively oversimplifying the situation given the number of factors when buying a flight, however it does prove that picking the right words is important.

http://econsultancy.com/au/blog/11066-can-copywriting-really-make-people-prefer-ryanair-to-british-airways?utm_medium=email&utm_source=daily_pulse

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